JGB’s Final Stage of Life as Poetry

In Dramatic Universe, Volume 3, Bennett speaks about the stages of life. Of particular interest is what he has to say about the final stage of life. He puts the notion of “retirement” on its head, recommending that during this stage, one “retires” to a less outwardly active life. Dedicating part of each day to slower, quieter, inner activities. This is the time to be active inwardly rather than externally; a time when one’s attention is not focused on making money, advancing a career; doing things.

 

Last week I mentioned David Kherdian, a poet and 4th Way practitioner entering his nineties. David and Nonny have recently moved (yet again). This time it’s to an assisted living facility in Massachusetts. The difference is that this time, David expressed to me that he has come to accept “I cannot do things anymore.”

Several years ago David and Nonny moved to an assisted living place in the mid-west. There they came to the conclusion that they “weren’t ready to die.” So, they picked up and drove to Asheville, NC, a town David said, “I had always wanted to visit.” Which is where our paths crossed after many years of infrequent contact.

 

I mention all this because I am struck by David’s openness in sharing what goes through him and in the fact that my own “last phase of life” lags not so far behind his. Notwithstanding the multiple moves David and Nonny have made in just the past three years, David’s poetry continues to pour out and the quality continues to improve with age, like fine wine.

 

David handed the following two poems to me during our recent visit. I find them heart-wrenching and amazing the more I re-read them:

 

LOST DAUGHTER

for Kelly

 

To raise yourself up

but not a daughter

is to be childless—

an odd man out.

Not many attain it,

and it is not an achievement,

and may or may not be a loss,

for you can’t miss what you never had,

like a memory of something that can’t be remembered,

because you can’t exchange nothing

for an experience you missed—

 

It is lonely now in old age

to face the reaper empty handed

without the daughter you cannot

miss, or only miss like

the fly ball that fell between

your hands, a clean miss

 

But this doesn’t feel clean or

even dirty, because experiences

are the most important thing in life,

and only from them can we grow—

like the child you never had,

who fell between your

gripped fingers,

with you unable to hold what wasn’t there.

 

HOLDING

 

There in the photo kept in our album,

I am sitting on the ground beside our

neighbor, Deanna, slightly older,

clutching tenderly a tame black and

white rabbit in sheer and utter bliss,

to make a picture freezing in a moment

of time, as good poems can often do

 

Showing me that life is not a fleeting

action, but a thing stored in separate frames,

that we somehow have trouble deciphering,

for we are more comfortable with speed

than we are with rest

 

And too often to decipher what these

evanescent moments hold—

but then there is this photo that captures

again my full attention and wonder

each time I see it, in intervals some-

times of years, to see and feel again

the depths of my love for tender things,

which my essence holds unsmothered

by the years.

 

Poems by David Kherdian

6/2021

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